Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Explorers of Time

[Pearlpoke]

A uncouincuis Piplup lied on the beach a Cyndaquil woke the Piplup up and the Cyndaquil said"You're awake. Nice to meet you I'm Cynda".The Piplup replied"How are you talking you're a Pokemopn" and the Cyndaquil replied"So are you."Then the Piplup said"I'm a human"

[Settara]

ummmm this is hardly a fan fiction at all. You need to type something more original. The fan fics ive read from you are based off of games....
Im sorry if it sounds mean, but you need some improvement.

[pokegirl5000]

Are u making a story? if so thats a good start!

[Shiny Espeon]

An unconscious Piplup lied on the beach. A Cyndaquil woke the Piplup up and the Cyndaquil said, "You're awake. Nice to meet you. I'm Cynda." The Piplup replied, "How are you talking? You're a Pokemon!" The Cyndaquil replied, "So are you." Then the Piplup said, "I'm a human."

Basic corrections in bold. Yet you lack a plot, descriptions, and everything else that makes a story good. There's no hook at all, and let's face it-this is way too short for a fan fiction.

ummmm this is hardly a fan fiction at all. You need to type something more original. The fan fics ive read from you are based off of games....
Im sorry if it sounds mean, but you need some improvement.

I agree. Remember, capitlize the letter "I" and the beginning of sentences.

Are u making a story? if so thats a good start!

Type "u" as "you" please. Capitlize the beginning of your sentences as well.

[Pearlpoke]

That was the begining.It was supposed to go on Microsoft Word but I put on the wrong tab next Chapter will be better cause I found my long lost Mystery Dungeon 2 game.