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Pearlpoke
07-22-2008, 07:54 AM
Chapter 1
At the age of 10 the newest Pokemon Trainer, Matt began his journey.Last night he called the professer saying he wanted the Pokemon Piplup.Matt left his house with his bag and went to the professer's lab.When he arrived he saw 14 PokeBalls.The Professer said "Welcome Matt,your Piplup is the one on the left."Then Matt said "Thank you" and got Piplup's Pokeball and said "I'll nickname you Piplu,the same as my brother nicknamed his Piplup in the Sinnoh Region and became the best Pokemon Trainer in the world."Then the professer said "Matt wait I need to give you a PokeDex." Then Matt recieved the PokeDex and headed out the door.As Matt headed to Route 501 he saw a Starly.Matt threw Piplu's Pokeball and said"Go Piplu".Matt then said"Piplu,Growl then Pound attack." Piplu succesfully used both attacks and the Starly was down Then Matt threw a PokeBall and caught Starly.Matt nicknamed Starly Star.

Shiny Espeon
07-23-2008, 12:29 AM
Errrm...*swipes a hand over her forehead* To be quite honest, almost everything is wrong in this fanfiction. There's no plot, no gammar at all, inncorrect punctuation, no descriptions at all...

Would you like me to explain further? ^^;

Pearlpoke
07-23-2008, 08:30 AM
Yeah I was pretty tired when I posted this but here's the plot:A Pokemon Trainer begins his journey at the age of ten.With is Dad being a gym leader he strives to be better.With his brother in Sinnoh but visiting to help his brother,he has no end to adventure.

Chapter 2
Then Matt saw a familiar face with black hair and dark brown eyes it was his brother Heatran."What are you doing here?"Matt asked.Heatran replied"Just started my new adventure".Matt said"Wanna Battle" and Heatran replied"Sure".Matt said"Piplu Go." and heatran said"Piplu do your thing"Matt said"Piplup Bubble Beam" and the attack hit.Then Heatran said"Hydro Cannon now Empoleon"Then Matt said"Dodge Piplup".Then Matt said"Return, Go Star".Then Heatran replied"You wanna play that way then go Staraptor".
Then the two Pokemon anticipated as Matt said"Quick Attack now"Star quickly used Quick Attack in succesion.Heatran said"Return Staraptor and go Heatran".