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3speon
06-13-2008, 02:47 PM
A little one-shot I got an idea for yesterday:

I gathered electricity in my body upon my trainer's command. My wool was doubling in volume from the buildup of electricity; I could feel it. I released the charge in a jagged energy beam, which chased down the marill I was battling. It shocked her horribly, and I winced apologetically as she cried out in pain.

"Nice job, Mareep!" my trainer called out to me, lifting my spirits momentarily, "Finish it off with a Tackle!" I nodded and complied, rushing at Marill, who was struggling to stand, much less do anything to defend herself.

"I'm sorry!" I called, though my trainer would take it as a battle cry. I slammed into her, and she went flying and landed a yard or so away. Her trainer recalled her Pokemon and threw a bag heavy with coins at us.

"Great battle," she said, "Your mareep is really strong." With that she turned and walked away.

"Goodbye! I'm sorry!" I called after them, though I knew she wouldn't understand me. My trainer wrapped her arms around me in a hug, whispering praise in my ear.

But a tug beneath my feet put the moment on hold.

"Huh?" I said, stepping back. My trainer released me and looked at me, confusion in her eyes.

"What's wrong?" she asked, but I couldn't answer her.

My body was glowing white. Wool was shrinking away from my body and gathering in curls on top of my head and in a ring around my neck, leaving my body chilled. My spine bent and twisted, becoming foreign. It was suddenly uncomfortable to stand on my four legs, and I fell back to sit on my rear. My front legs shortened, forming arms, and my back legs lengthened, with a toenail pushing up from my feet. My face lost baby fat, becoming much more slender. Color returned to my body and the white glow faded away. I looked down to find my wool white and my body pink. What had happened to my thick yellow fleece and blue head and feet? I was changed now, and when I tried to speak my voice was different as well.

I looked up to my trainer, hoping she would have an answer.

"Oh, my goodness! You evolved!" she said, seemingly ecstatic. Hm. Maybe it wasn't so bad being different. I stumbled over to her, completely unused to walking on only two legs. She swept me up in another hug, and whispered two words in my ear.

"Congratulations, Flaaffy."

Shiny Espeon
06-19-2008, 09:48 PM
That was very cute. ^.^ I liked the way you gave the Pokemon emotions, feelings for the Marill she beat. Evolution is truly a wonderful thing, and I'm glad you wrote this.

Flawless grammar and punctuation, as always. :rolleyes:

3speon
06-20-2008, 04:40 PM
Aw, thank you! The idea just sorta came up out of nowhere. To be honest, my computer shut off out of nowhere and I had to retype it. I think it was for the best, though, because I like the second one better. I had this crazy idea to write one of these for every Pokemon that can evolve, but that'd take forever. xD