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Akai
04-22-2008, 02:14 AM
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Jimmy ran down the path, to the small house at the base of the huge mountain range known as Ice Mountain. He was planning on going over the mountain, instead of taking the hazardous Ice Path to Blackthorn City. The young trainer supplied himself, looking at the peak in determination. "Blazer... we're going to reach the top and be in Blackthorn in no time."

"Cyna-Quill!" His small friend cried out happily, in his arms. He smiled, "Yep. I'm going to beat Marina there for sure." A gleam flickered in his eye as an older woman walked up behind him, "Son? Your Mareep and Pidgey are fine. Even your Eevee is in perfect condition. You may take them back." She presented him his PokeBalls. Jimmy thanked the nice lady and clipped his Pokemon to his belt. He glanced at the mountain again, "Say, ma'am... How long does it take to go over Ice Mountain?"

"Go over Ice Mountain!?" She gasped, as an old man came out, his face twisted in objection, "Young'in, you must be out of your mind! That's too dangerous for a kid like you!"

"Seymore, calm down," The woman smiled, but the old man kept ranting, "It's always these cocky kids! 'I can do any thing with my Pokemon...' When I was a kid,..." The old man shuffled off into another room. Jimmy stood there dumbfounded, "Um... thanks?"

"He's rather right, son. Take the Ice Path, for your sake. It's safer." The woman nodded. Jimmy walked to the door, "Thanks, but I think I can make it. Thank you for tending to my Pokemon. See ya." He left, walking to the imfamous Ice Mountain. He watched as several trainers enter the Ice Path cavern and scoff, "Noobs..." He took a long, winding path up the mountain.

Nearly halfway up, the wind turned chilling, making even Cyndaquil shiver from the cold. Jimmy nodded, pulling his hood up, "Yeah, Buddy... This is cold. We're almost to the top. Getting up is the hard part."

"...quil." Cyndaquil moaned, burying himself into the thick jacket. Jimmy gave a worried look, seeing how uncertain his Pokemon was, but he continued to trek the mountainous path, getting into a snowy area. "Wow! Blazer, check this out!" He watched the gentle snow fall softly on the ground. The path he was following was gone, and replaced by the crunching of snow. Cynaquil poked his head out, looking around.

The little Pokemon's eyes lit up at the sight of the beautifully white snow. He wiggled a little, jumping out of the jacket and hitting the frozen ground, yelling out in surprise and jumping up. Jimmy quickly picked him up again, laughing a little, "Sorry, Blazer. Snow is very cold on your little footies. You'd better stay in my jacket. Cyndaquil huffed, looking off, until a big, cold gust of wind blew over them, bringing in more snow. The little Fire Pokemon quickly returned to the jacket's safety. Jimmy held the hood over his head, getting more worried.

The wind calmed down to nothing, letting Jimmy drop his guard again and then blasted him with harsh gales and large flakes of snow. It was a storm, something Jimmy wished he knew about. His visibility faded into nothing, blinded by white specks. The temperature dropped to below zero and Jimmy was left defenseless. He gritted his teeth, hugging Cyndaquil to his body and started running blinding, just looking for something to stay in until the storm passed.

Kaboom
04-22-2008, 02:24 AM
This is very good, mainly because it's original (no Zangy), but also because it is well written and funny too. Nice!

Akai
04-22-2008, 09:39 AM
Well, thanks. Tell me, what's so funny? The old man? :D Haha.

Kaboom
04-22-2008, 12:08 PM
Cyndaquil's reaction when he stepped on the snow...

Akai
04-22-2008, 03:02 PM
Jimmy's legs stung from the flying ice in the storm. His shorts weren't helping him very much. Poor Cyndaquil shivered and whimpered. Jimmy took a quick look down, "It's going to be okay, Blazer... It's going to be ok-AHHH!" His feet left him as the ground started to disappear. The snow started to shift and Jimmy went with it. He hit the side of a cliff, sliding down in a tumbling blur. Cyndaquil went flying out of the protective jacket and landing hard in the snow. Jimmy finally came to a halt, passed out from the drop. Cyndaquil popped his head out and melted the snow enough to get out.

"Quil!" He ran to his trainer, nudging him, but he recieved no answer. Cyndaquil whimpered as wind whipped up again. The little Pokemon scanned the surrounding, and spotted a small cave. He nudged Jimmy again, hoping he'd wake, but nothing. Cyndaquil sniffed around Jimmy's belt for his Pokemon, only one remained. He looked around, stunned, hoping to find the other two. "Cyndaquil!" He cried out, hoping to get an answer. "Quil! Cyndaquil!"

He ran around, as the wind died down, looking for the PokeBalls. He found one, popping it open. Mareep came out, happily crying, "Mareeeep!" Cyndaquil told Mareep the problem and the two of them went to Jimmy. Mareep got under the boy and lifted him to her back. Cyndaquil told her to go to the cave, and Mareep slowly trekked to the cave, seeing a PokeBall in the snow. "Reep?" Cyndaquil ran to it, tapping it. A Pidgey popped out, stunned, "Pid?"

Together the three Pokemon move the unconcious trainer into the cave and sealed the mouth with snow. Pidgey pecked at the last PokeBall, releasing Eevee. He looked around, "Vee?" Cyndaquil informed the little fox Pokemon about what happened and Eevee went to Jimmy, snuggling with him to keep him warm. Mareep and Pidgey did the same. Cyndaquil lit his flame, warming the cavern, trying to keep Jimmy and his friends as warm as possible, listening to the wind howl outside.

Kaboom
04-22-2008, 04:10 PM
hmm... what happens next, I wonder?

Akai
04-22-2008, 04:12 PM
I detect a small bit of sarcasm. =/

Kaboom
04-22-2008, 05:24 PM
no, not at all. I hope nothing bad happens to that Cyndaquil...

Akai
04-22-2008, 09:49 PM
O_O How did you know!? ....!!!

I mean... Look a distraction! *runs off*

Akai
04-27-2008, 01:42 PM
Cyndaquil moaned a little bit, shivering from the cold ground. He walked around, waiting for his master to wake. Hours later, Jimmy started to stir, but the storm outside was going strong. "Hmn? Where am I?" He looked around at his Pokemon huddled around him and Cyndaquil. "Blaze? Blazer!" He picked him up, "How long has your flame been out?"

"...uill..." His cry was weak. Jimmy felt his Pokemon's cheeks. "Ice cold. Blazer, listen to me, stop this! You're sick. Please." Cyndaquil shook his head. Jimmy closed his eyes, taking a PokeBall, "Cyndaquil, get in." The Pokemon refused. Jimmy sniffled, "You're really sick. Please, get in." Cyndaquil wiggled out of Jimmy's arms and waddled off. Jimmy stood up, "Cyndaquil, return!" The Pokemon was called back, and the cave went cold. He turn to his other Pokemon, "Okay, you too. Get in." The shook their heads. He sighed, taking each of their Pokemon, "Return... everyone."

Soon the cave a empty and cold. Jimmy walked to a small corner and sat down, curling up for warmth. "This is my fault. I had to come this way. Now Blazer's sick... my Pokemon are cold... and probably hungry. There's no telling how long I was out. Please... I don't want to die. I want my Pokemon to be safe. It's not their fault... It's mine." He pulled his knees to him and started to sob into them.

Akai
05-01-2008, 01:34 AM
Jimmy slowly fell to his side, crying himself to sleep. His PokeBalls started to wiggle, suddenly all popping open and his Pokemon coming out. They all surrounded him, keeping him warm. Jimmy didn't stop this. His eyes got heavy, as he fell victim to the warmth. Hours pass, and the storm was finally calmed down. All four Pokemon and trainer were in a deep sleep. The snow fell softly outside until finally stopping the next morning.



An Arcanine ran around, sniffing about on the fresh snow. His trainer followed, "Not too far, Fang." The older trainer looked around, "Quite a storm came... it's beautiful." He took out his camera, snapping a few. The Arcanine circled around, coming across a small scarf. He pulled at it, brining it to the surface. A few barks called his trainer over. "Hm? Fang, what is it?... Oh, a scarf." The trainer looked at the scarf, letting Arcanine roam around, coming to the cave where Jimmy lay. After digging the mouth free of snow, more barks came from the dog Pokemon.

The trainer ran over to his Pokemon, gasping, seeing Jimmy and the four Pokemon. "Oh my goodness! Go get Officer Jenny from Blackthorne!"Arcanine nodded, running off. The trainer released his Pokemon: Pidgeot, Jolteon, Ariados, and Azumarill. He and his Pokemon went to Jimmy's aid, warming him and his Pokemon. Soon, Arcanine returned with a couple Jennys and a small rescue force. They moved Jimmy and his Pokemon to Blackthorne City, healing all of them.

After a long sleep, Jimmy woke up, seeing his Cyndaquil sitting on his chest. "Quill!" The small Pokemon cheered, jumping in for a hug. Jimmy laughing, catching him, "Blazer! You're okay." His other Pokemon gave a cry. Jimmy looked, seeing them at his bedside, "Hey, everyone. Good to see you." He smiled, letting each one in bed with him, all wanting a hug. Jimmy laughed, hugging each one, happy that the nightmare on the ice mountain was over.

THE END

Kaboom
05-01-2008, 03:40 AM
Nice ending - I was expecting it to be a bit longer, though...

Anyway, you won't believe this, but I just realized I have a Typhlosion in my story (have yet to type the Scenes with him in), and he's called Blazer too! I couldn't believe it!

Akai
05-01-2008, 10:30 AM
Heh. Yeah. I was thinking of doing one fanfic a month, and since April was at an end, I really had to wrap this one up. I'll keep it open a few days for comments, then it'll close.