Shiny Espeon
04-01-2008, 08:37 PM
Well, we're doing some poetry in my English class, and I though I'd just share this with you guys. Discuss, post your own poetry, etc. ;) By the way, this thread is for poetry you wrote.
A coma breezing her mind
Into a world of new life she binds
She won’t awake, although she makes
a fantasy.
Pastel colors swirling and painting the never ending sky
She’s dubious, although this HD land can’t be a lie
Swaying grass and flowers in large mass
She’s wondering when this will pass
Rocky mountains and forests untouched by pollution
Is this a delusion?
A silky voice make of melting butter
She turns around to the gentle mutter
There stands her sweetest dream
A boy whiter than cream with a beautiful beam of a smile
Her quietly ushers “walk with me for a while”
Not wanting to misplace her dream, she trails after.
“We are the dream”
They gallop through butterscotch light
Where there might be a chupacabra, but not a fright
And disappear into towering mountains
Where there might be an abamasnowman, but not a wasted can
“And you are the dreamer.”
Along the trail
stands posted, another male
“I’m Vale the vampire”
“And I’m Raire, the fairy”
“Don’t forget Donald the Duck”
Before the day meets the mystic night,
the original couple blended into a jubilant group
as the party pranced through
her fantasy.
Night dominated over the bright light
and instead threw the world into mixes
of black and blue.
A lunar eclipse moon than you can touch
and a solar eclipse moon barely seeable and such
soon dumped red and white paint
making a beautiful scene
in her fantasy.
Melodic instrumental music with a familiar tone
Together, as a dream couple, they moan
“I never want this to end.”
He took her hand
and as an unbreakable band
they flew into the clouds
into a party with the moons as their light and friends for their laughter
Once heavily intoxicated and PG-13 rated
He took her hand
and they both jumped into the crystal clear ocean
an unjostling motion.
They laughed together underwater
and said hi to Nessie.
As they bond in the waters untouched by scientific law
Raw, vivid emotions flutter
The three sacred words surface
creating feelings never felt before.
But then he frowned
His swirling hair making a beautiful crown
“I cannot withhold you from the joys of life
no matter how much I love you.”
Confused, he kissed her dancing hair
creating feelings that are rare
and they unwillingly parted from
her fantasy.
A coma flew away from her mind
And although her friends and family were joyed,
she couldn’t grasp that she would never be binded
again
into
her fantasy.
And that was written by me.
A coma breezing her mind
Into a world of new life she binds
She won’t awake, although she makes
a fantasy.
Pastel colors swirling and painting the never ending sky
She’s dubious, although this HD land can’t be a lie
Swaying grass and flowers in large mass
She’s wondering when this will pass
Rocky mountains and forests untouched by pollution
Is this a delusion?
A silky voice make of melting butter
She turns around to the gentle mutter
There stands her sweetest dream
A boy whiter than cream with a beautiful beam of a smile
Her quietly ushers “walk with me for a while”
Not wanting to misplace her dream, she trails after.
“We are the dream”
They gallop through butterscotch light
Where there might be a chupacabra, but not a fright
And disappear into towering mountains
Where there might be an abamasnowman, but not a wasted can
“And you are the dreamer.”
Along the trail
stands posted, another male
“I’m Vale the vampire”
“And I’m Raire, the fairy”
“Don’t forget Donald the Duck”
Before the day meets the mystic night,
the original couple blended into a jubilant group
as the party pranced through
her fantasy.
Night dominated over the bright light
and instead threw the world into mixes
of black and blue.
A lunar eclipse moon than you can touch
and a solar eclipse moon barely seeable and such
soon dumped red and white paint
making a beautiful scene
in her fantasy.
Melodic instrumental music with a familiar tone
Together, as a dream couple, they moan
“I never want this to end.”
He took her hand
and as an unbreakable band
they flew into the clouds
into a party with the moons as their light and friends for their laughter
Once heavily intoxicated and PG-13 rated
He took her hand
and they both jumped into the crystal clear ocean
an unjostling motion.
They laughed together underwater
and said hi to Nessie.
As they bond in the waters untouched by scientific law
Raw, vivid emotions flutter
The three sacred words surface
creating feelings never felt before.
But then he frowned
His swirling hair making a beautiful crown
“I cannot withhold you from the joys of life
no matter how much I love you.”
Confused, he kissed her dancing hair
creating feelings that are rare
and they unwillingly parted from
her fantasy.
A coma flew away from her mind
And although her friends and family were joyed,
she couldn’t grasp that she would never be binded
again
into
her fantasy.
And that was written by me.